Thursday, November 17, 2011

Poems

We did a unit on poetry and this is what I wrote.



We read Love That Dog by Sharon Creech.
Poetry is slow catchy words. I’m not a fan of poetry. I don’t dislike poetry.
Pause #1: He can do poetry but he doesn’t like people to notice. He is okay with it on the board but he doesn’t want people to know.
Pause #2: He has a dog but doesn’t want to write about it. He writes about it but he is still anonymous.
Pause #3: He is really, really good at poetry. Every one wants to know who is writing this awesome stuff but he is still anonymous.
Pause #4: He is OK with people knowing it’s him but now there is a new person being anonymous. They play with his dog.
Pause #5: He wants his favorite author to go to school. He forgets about it thinking he will never come.
Pause #6: He learned that the computer had spell check and he learns to type. He types a sad poem.
End: He meets his favorite author. He writes to his author and writes a poem about his dog.

Jack was inspired by his favorite author Water Dean Myers but also he is inspired by his animals and other things around him.

My attempt:                                           tip
                                                            Roof roof       chimney
                                                  Roof roof roof roof chimney
                                           Roof roof roof roof roof roof
                                    Roof roof roof roof roof roof roof roof
                                       Wall wall wall wall wall wall wall
                                        Wall wall wall door wall wall wall
                                        Wall wall wall door wall wall wall

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